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Fic: KA: Affinity
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[info]fyrethief
Fandom: King Arthur (2004 movie)
Title: Affinity
Characters: Galahad
Length: 100
Rating: G
Summary: Compassion and affinity came to Galahad abruptly.
Prompt: Picture prompt, over here.

Author's Notes: Ha, clearly the picture warped in my head when I went to write this. It doesn't look like I thought it did when I go back to it now. Oh well!

The women are waiting anxiously when the knights ride back in. Not for them; nobody waits for them.

They ride on, horses sweaty and shaking. Behind them, red and gold, come the Roman soldiers.

The women step closer; trembling hands lift up lanterns to expose faces. Galahad feels their fearful hope and turns his dirty, bloody face aside.

He thinks all Romans are bastards, and these Briton women fools, but he knows some woman will not be greeting her lover home tonight - and empathy flares.

Painfully, Galahad thinks of the brother he lost last week.

It's not so very different.

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Oh, that's gorgeous. I can completely see it too - I love the line about the "sweaty and shaking" horses.

Great work.

"It's not so very different."

That line makes the punch, makes the moment. Well done.

Thanks! :) I love a drabble with a good punch at the end, but they're not always easy to write.


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